Thursday, April 28, 2011

My new poem

"Dissociative Event"

Phase transition
Consciousness shifting

Higher dimensional
Fog lifting

Pure energy
Synaptic liberation

Perception expands
Higher excitation

Ontological freedom
Omnipresent thought

Time redefined
Connections sought

Awareness expands
Darkness flee

A moment
For me

- by Zachary Uram (c) 2011


  1. cool poem! are you describing yourself? haha

  2. That about sums it up if to do so is possible. From darkness into the Light. I like it. Thanks for sharing. -Tim Netzley

  3. You are most welcome Tim. Thanks for the feedback!

  4. I like it too, although it seems ambiguous enough to apply to several scenarios (which is good if what you intended). Humorously, it calls to mind the scene from "Animal House" when they ponder the presence of little universes within their own fingernails: "Like, wow, man!"

  5. Heh that movie is hilarious. Yes intentional ambiguity. Thanks man!

  6. Very interesting, and yes, moving from darkness to light. I had to use my dictionary on this one! Well done.


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